Feedback

Once we had our teacher look over our music video he had alot of feed back for us to work on.

The following were positive comments:

• Edited well
• Strong foundation for the narrative
• Excellent variety of camera work and mise-en-scene

However the following comments are the areas we are missing or need work on:

• Alot more shots
• Scenes are too long
• Another character (Female) is needed to give the narrative better meaning
• More locations with lip synching